By Miriam Holt, Academic Advisor
Grammar/Writing: Sentence Correction
Confusing the object of a prepositional phrase for the subject of a sentence, and thus choosing the wrong verb
e.g. choosing “None of us are going,” instead of the correct version, “None of us is going.”
Students should learn to recognize prepositions and put brackets around prepositional phrases so that they can help themselves zero in on the true subject of the sentence.
Failing to consider a small word at the beginning of the sentence
Students should remember that just because a word shows up early in the sentence doesn’t mean it’s correct. Always scrutinize prepositions and conjunctions which appear at the beginnings of sentences.
Failing to look for parallel structures
Students must become accustomed to requiring parallel structures in sentence construction on the SAT, even when we would not hold such strict requirements for other formal writing. According to the SAT, this is incorrect: “To call her narrow-minded is like calling water wet,” but this is correct: “Calling her narrow-minded is like calling water wet.”)
Permitting a misplaced modifier
Students should make sure that dependent clauses with unspecified subjects are placed adjacent to their subjects in the sentence, e.g. “Carrying an umbrella, Carol didn’t mind the rain,” instead of “Carrying an umbrella, the rain didn’t bother Carol.” Technically, the second implies that it was the rain who was carrying an umbrella.
Choosing the wrong pronoun #1: pronoun case
Students should be clear on pronoun case and should learn the difference between a subject and a direct object.
Choosing the wrong pronoun #2: pronoun number
Students should resist the temptation to match words like “someone” or “anyone” or “everyone” with pronouns like “they” and “them”, because plural pronouns cannot substitute for singular nouns. Instead, the student must choose singular pronouns such as “him”, “her”, “he”, “she”, and “one”.)
Permitting an illegal pronoun
Students should be sure pronouns only appear in sentences that also explicitly state which noun the pronoun replaces. This is wrong: “He promised to cut taxes and improve services, but he failed to keep them,” but this is right: “He made promises to cut taxes and improve services, but he failed to keep them.” “Promised” is not a noun and cannot be replaced with a pronoun, but “promises” is a noun, so it’s fine to use a pronoun to replace it.
Untrained ear
Some students can’t detect grammatical errors easily because they’ve never been trained to speak or write according to the rules of grammar which the SAT uses.